also why do you dislike the L86 LSW - it's just an L85A2 that performs like an LMG with a heavier barrel. don't let the magazine size scare you. this thing is extremely potent and will shred people at 200+ studs, assuming you hit them. since you have 30 bullets and only need to score 4 of those to kill, your chances of killing said enemy is rather high.
However, upon reviewing your edit with the AK-12, I would like to point out a couple things.
The most glaring issue I have spotted is your usage of informal vocabulary. In our Manual of Style, we discourage any usage of words such as you. In your AK-12 edit however, it does have that.
In addition, I would not recommend putting attachment suggestions in the Pros and Cons. (The one section where you put “This can even be greatly increased by using Hollow Point ammunition, letting you kill with one burst in CQC, if all shots hit.”)
This is also something I would not put in: “More common ammunition type, but still less common than 5.56x45mm NATO.” as this is more or less purely determined by the lobby and what guns they are using. If a lobby is dominated by people using 5.45x39mm guns, then that would render this statement false.
Those are a few things pointed out. If you would like further clarification, or have any more questions, please do not hesitate to look at our Manual of Style, or ask a staff member.
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